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Remember to Final WRIT write your name. The chart shows information on the “Deaths Due to Cardiovascular Disease by Age and Gender in the U.S.A.” Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Write a title too. . Deaths Due to Cardiovascular Disease in the U.S.A. (000s) 300 250 230 250 190 200 Men 150 Wome 100 40 50 15 64-45 84-65 +85 1. 2. Final Writing I: Paragraph Introduction Types: Correct the following titles Identify (1) the topic sentence, and (2) the irreverent sentence that does not belong to the paragraph (doesn’t support the main idea). Punctuation and Capitalization Writing: Describing Statistics 3. 4. eeeeeee 1. Type 1: Correct the following titles Eating In The United States of Americal_Eating in the United States of America Learning English Is Important.” _Learning English is important_ the Most important Day Of My Life _The Most Important Day of My Life_ 2. 3. Type 2: Identify (1) the topic sentence, and (2) the irrelevant sentence that doesn’t belong to the paragraph Ex 1. 1. Which of the following sentences is the topic sentence? 2. Which of the following sentences that does not support the main idea? a. [1] The capital city of a country is usually a very important city. [2] The government offices are located in the capital city and political leaders usually live there. [3] There are many different types of governments in the world. [4] The capital city may also be the center of culture. [5] Finally, the capital city can serve as the center of trade, industry and commerce. b. [1] The Japanese automobile industry uses robots in many stages of its production process. [2] In fact, one large Japanese auto factory uses robots in all its production stages. [3] Some Japanese universities are developing medical robots to detect certain types of cancer. [4] Another automobile factory in Japan uses them to paint cars as they come off the assembly line. [5] Furthermore, most Japanese factories use robots to join the parts of the finished car together. c. [1] There are several ways people can protect natural resources. [2] One way is to turn off lights and machines when they are not in use. Another way is to drive cars less. [3] My favorite car is a convertible. [4] People can also insulate their houses better. [5] Finally, by reusing things like bottles and plastic bags, people can reduce the amount of waste. Final Writing II: Punctuation & Writing Punctuate the following sentences and put the correct capitalization if necessary. I. 1. In the center of London, the number of people who fell victim to pickpockets. After twelve years of therapy, my psychiatrist said something that brought tears to my eyes. 2. 3. On Tuesday. 4th July, a band played carols in the park for 8 hours. Day, Date 4. Ms. Espinoza has offered to coach the team this year ; however, the competition for the job is intense. SI +; however , +S2 S1+, but +S2 Date, Year 5. 6. 7. On December 12th 2010, Dr. Mohammed operated on this cardiac patient. Dr. Tom Richardson, an American surgeon , became the Head of General Surgery in University of California Hospital last year. Students wanted to study hard; however, they were disturbed by the noise last night. The accident happened suddenly; therefore, the victims were sent to the hospital by ambulance last night. Si+; therefore, + S2== S1+, so +S2 Narrowing or blocking the airways, for example, will cause the symptoms of asthma. 8. 9. 10. Researchers, however, haven’t given up the hope of finding ways to treat inherited diseases. Semi-colon (;)
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